From d81dbe10796238a9019dd327c477c827868eb848 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: --add Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 15:29:49 +0530 Subject: [PATCH] fixes from proofreading the guide --- topics/first-boot/admin-console.adoc | 2 +- topics/first-boot/distribution-files-community.adoc | 4 ++-- topics/first-boot/distribution-files-product.adoc | 4 ++-- topics/first-realm/user.adoc | 2 +- topics/secure-jboss-app/before.adoc | 2 +- topics/secure-jboss-app/create-client.adoc | 2 +- topics/secure-jboss-app/download-quickstarts.adoc | 6 +++--- topics/secure-jboss-app/install-client-adapter.adoc | 2 +- topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc | 2 +- 9 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/topics/first-boot/admin-console.adoc b/topics/first-boot/admin-console.adoc index 917e410fc1..8e0042b7df 100755 --- a/topics/first-boot/admin-console.adoc +++ b/topics/first-boot/admin-console.adoc @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Enter the username and password you created on the Welcome Page. This will brin .Admin Console image:../../{{book.images}}/admin-console.png[] -TIP: If you are curious about a certain feature, button, or field within the Admin Console, simply hover your mouse +NOTE: If you are curious about a certain feature, button, or field within the Admin Console, simply hover your mouse over any question mark `?` icon. This will pop up tooltip text to describe the area of the console you are interested in. The image above shows the tooltip in action. diff --git a/topics/first-boot/distribution-files-community.adoc b/topics/first-boot/distribution-files-community.adoc index c0a5cdc0a5..c06f213f66 100755 --- a/topics/first-boot/distribution-files-community.adoc +++ b/topics/first-boot/distribution-files-community.adoc @@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ The {{book.project.name}} Server is contained in one distribution file: * 'keycloak-{{book.project.version}}.[zip|tar.gz]' The 'keycloak-{{book.project.version}}.[zip|tar.gz]' file is the server only distribution. It contains nothing other than the scripts and binaries -to run the {{book.project.name}} Server. +to run the {{book.project.name}} server. -To unpack of these files run the `unzip` or `gunzip` and `tar` utilities. +To unpack these files run the `unzip` or `gunzip` and `tar` utilities. diff --git a/topics/first-boot/distribution-files-product.adoc b/topics/first-boot/distribution-files-product.adoc index f5d63994ef..c79ed45aa1 100755 --- a/topics/first-boot/distribution-files-product.adoc +++ b/topics/first-boot/distribution-files-product.adoc @@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ The {{book.project.name}} Server is contained in one distribution file: * 'RH-SSO-{{book.project.version}}.[zip|tar.gz]' The 'RH-SSO-{{book.project.version}}.[zip|tar.gz]' file is the server only distribution. It contains nothing other than the scripts and binaries -to run the {{book.project.name}} Server. +to run the {{book.project.name}} server. -To unpack of these files run the `unzip` or `gunzip` and `tar` utilities. +To unpack these files run the `unzip` or `gunzip` and `tar` utilities. diff --git a/topics/first-realm/user.adoc b/topics/first-realm/user.adoc index 6b70a7b1d8..0e225e5d4f 100755 --- a/topics/first-realm/user.adoc +++ b/topics/first-realm/user.adoc @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ image:../../{{book.images}}/add-user.png[] The only required field is `Username`. Click save. This will bring you to the management page for your new user. The next step is to define a temporary password for your new user. Click on the `Credentials` tab to bring you to -the page that will allo you to do this. +the page that will allow you to do this. .Set Temporary Password image:../../{{book.images}}/credentials.png[] diff --git a/topics/secure-jboss-app/before.adoc b/topics/secure-jboss-app/before.adoc index 099344b6fa..5e1fc71f2f 100755 --- a/topics/secure-jboss-app/before.adoc +++ b/topics/secure-jboss-app/before.adoc @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ Before you can participate in this tutorial, you need to complete the installation of {{book.project.name}} and create the initial admin user as shown in the <> tutorial. There is one -caveat to this. You are going to have to run a separate JBoss EAP 7 or Wildfly 10 instance on the same machine as the +caveat to this. You have to run a separate JBoss EAP 7 or Wildfly 10 instance on the same machine as the {{book.project.name}} server. This separate instance will run your Java Servlet application. Because of this you will have to run the {{book.project.name}} under a different port so that there are no port conflicts when running on the same machine. Use the `jboss.socket.binding.port-offset` system property on the command line. The value of this property diff --git a/topics/secure-jboss-app/create-client.adoc b/topics/secure-jboss-app/create-client.adoc index 25db8e4a5c..7768b365d7 100644 --- a/topics/secure-jboss-app/create-client.adoc +++ b/topics/secure-jboss-app/create-client.adoc @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ The next step you have to do is to define and register the client in the {{book.project.name}} Admin Console. Log into the Admin Console with your admin account as you did in previous tutorials. In the top left hand drop down menu select and manage -the `demo` realm. Next click the `Clients` left menu. This will bring you to the `Clients` page. +the `demo` realm. Click `Clients` in the left side menu. This will bring you to the `Clients` page. .Clients image:../../{{book.images}}/clients.png[] diff --git a/topics/secure-jboss-app/download-quickstarts.adoc b/topics/secure-jboss-app/download-quickstarts.adoc index bb49a9d5b2..8a18f99ecb 100644 --- a/topics/secure-jboss-app/download-quickstarts.adoc +++ b/topics/secure-jboss-app/download-quickstarts.adoc @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ === Download, Build, Deploy Application Code -The project and code for the application you are going to secure it at Github.com. You will need the following +The project and code for the application you are going to secure is at Github.com. You will need the following installed on your machine and available in your PATH before you can continue: * Java JDK 8 @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ will pop up a BASIC auth login dialog. image:../../{{book.images}}/client-auth-required.png[] -The app is not secured by any identity provider, so anything you enter in the dialog will result in a `Forbidden` message being -sent back by the server. The next section describes how you can take this existing deployed app and secure it. +The app is not secured by any identity provider, so anything you enter in the dialog box will result in a `Forbidden` message being +sent back by the server. The next section describes how you can take this deployed app and secure it. diff --git a/topics/secure-jboss-app/install-client-adapter.adoc b/topics/secure-jboss-app/install-client-adapter.adoc index c7d3a7fa85..9c7bb212c5 100644 --- a/topics/secure-jboss-app/install-client-adapter.adoc +++ b/topics/secure-jboss-app/install-client-adapter.adoc @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ === Install the Client Adapter Download the JBoss EAP 7 or Wildfly 10 distribution you are going to use to run your example application and unzip -it into a directory of your choosing on your machine. Next download the {{book.clientadapter}} distribution. Unzip +it into a directory on your machine. Next download the {{book.clientadapter}} distribution. Unzip this file into the root directory of your JBoss EAP or Wildfly 10 distribution. Next perform the following actions .Linux/Unix diff --git a/topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc b/topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc index 4a955d8f31..fb764694d3 100644 --- a/topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc +++ b/topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ Change the `WAR MODULE NAME` text to be `vanilla` as follows: ---- -Reboot your application's server and now when visit http://localhost:8080/vanilla and hit the login button, you should +Reboot your application's server and now when you visit http://localhost:8080/vanilla and hit the login button, you should get the {{book.project.name}} login page. You can log in using the user you created in the <> chapter.