From 9281c4495d98316214b1df91d1d9fd5800c0958a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: --add Date: Thu, 2 Jun 2016 15:16:44 +0530 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] incorporated QE feddback comments --- topics/first-boot/admin-console.adoc | 2 +- topics/first-realm/account.adoc | 2 +- topics/first-realm/realm.adoc | 4 ++-- topics/first-realm/user.adoc | 4 ++-- topics/secure-jboss-app/download-quickstarts.adoc | 6 +++--- topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc | 8 ++++---- 6 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/topics/first-boot/admin-console.adoc b/topics/first-boot/admin-console.adoc index 2723909a8d..917e410fc1 100755 --- a/topics/first-boot/admin-console.adoc +++ b/topics/first-boot/admin-console.adoc @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ Alternatively you can go to the console url directly at http://localhost:8080/au .Login Page image:../../{{book.images}}/login-page.png[] -Enter the username and password you created on the Welcome Page. This will bring you to the {{book.project.name}} Admin Console +Enter the username and password you created on the Welcome Page. This will bring you to the {{book.project.name}} Admin Console. .Admin Console image:../../{{book.images}}/admin-console.png[] diff --git a/topics/first-realm/account.adoc b/topics/first-realm/account.adoc index 52633ccc1a..33a0f46536 100755 --- a/topics/first-realm/account.adoc +++ b/topics/first-realm/account.adoc @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ Next, login to the User Account Service of your `demo` realm with the user you j User Account Link:: http://localhost:8080/auth/realms/demo/account -Enter in the username and temporary password you created. You will be asked to change and create a permanent password after you +Enter the username and temporary password you created. You will be asked to change and create a permanent password after you successfully login. .Update Password diff --git a/topics/first-realm/realm.adoc b/topics/first-realm/realm.adoc index 3607bc17ec..34b03aa617 100755 --- a/topics/first-realm/realm.adoc +++ b/topics/first-realm/realm.adoc @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Login to the {{book.project.name}} Admin Console using the account you created i Admin Console Link:: http://localhost:8080/auth/admin/ -Mouse over the top left corner drop down menu that is titled with `Master`. If you are logged in the master realm +Mouseover the top left corner drop down menu that is titled with `Master`. If you are logged in the master realm this drop down menu lists all the realms created. The last entry of this drop down menu is always `Add Realm`. Click this to add a realm. @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ enter in `demo` for the realm name and click `Create`. image:../../{{book.images}}/create-realm.png[] After creating the realm you are brought back to the main Admin Console page. The current realm will now be set to -`demo`. You can switch between managing the `master` realm and the realm you just created by doing a mouse over on the +`demo`. You can switch between managing the `master` realm and the realm you just created by doing a mouseover on the top left corner drop down menu. diff --git a/topics/first-realm/user.adoc b/topics/first-realm/user.adoc index 7ea934e961..8f2d46834d 100755 --- a/topics/first-realm/user.adoc +++ b/topics/first-realm/user.adoc @@ -22,9 +22,9 @@ the page that will allo you to do this. .Set Temporary Password image:../../{{book.images}}/credentials.png[] -Enter in a new password and retype it within the `Password Confirmation` field. Once you do this a red `Reset Password` +Enter a new password and retype it within the `Password Confirmation` field. Once you do this a red `Reset Password` button should reappear. Clicking on that will reset the user's password to the new one you specified. Please note that -this is a temporary password and the user will be required to change it after they first log in. You can make it permanent +this is a temporary password and the users are required to change it after they first log in. You can make it permanent by flipping the `Temporary` switch from `On` to `Off` before you click the `Reset Password` button. diff --git a/topics/secure-jboss-app/download-quickstarts.adoc b/topics/secure-jboss-app/download-quickstarts.adoc index 27db674eba..bb49a9d5b2 100644 --- a/topics/secure-jboss-app/download-quickstarts.adoc +++ b/topics/secure-jboss-app/download-quickstarts.adoc @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ You can obtain the code by cloning the quickstart repo at git@github.com:jboss-developer/rh-sso-quickstarts.git. Follow these steps to download the code, build it, and deploy it. Make sure your JBoss EAP or Wildfly app server instance is running before you start these steps! -.clone project +.Clone Project [source] ---- $ git clone git@github.com:jboss-developer/rh-sso-quickstarts.git @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ You should see some text scroll down in the app server console window. After th http://localhost:8080/vanilla -.app login page +.App Login Page image:../../{{book.images}}/app-login-page.png[] If you open up the application's _web.xml_ file you would see that the application is secured via `BASIC` authentication. @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ If you click on the login button on the login page, the browser will pop up a BASIC auth login dialog. -.app login dialog +.App Login Dialog image:../../{{book.images}}/client-auth-required.png[] diff --git a/topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc b/topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc index 4a955d8f31..50b80cb12c 100644 --- a/topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc +++ b/topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc @@ -7,14 +7,14 @@ Open this file and search for the following text: [source,xml] ---- - + ---- Modify this a little bit to prepare it for pasting in your template from the `Installation` tab. [source,xml] ---- - + ---- @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Within the `subsystem` element, paste in the template. It will look something l [source,xml] ---- - + demo MIIBIjANBgkqhkiG9B @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Change the `WAR MODULE NAME` text to be `vanilla` as follows: [source,xml] ---- - + ... From 8d57ce83b1ebdbc0145981de11cfb8ca65a9a7f4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: --add Date: Thu, 2 Jun 2016 15:44:03 +0530 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] changes reverted based on Stian's comments --- topics/first-realm/realm.adoc | 2 +- topics/first-realm/user.adoc | 2 +- topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc | 8 ++++---- 3 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/topics/first-realm/realm.adoc b/topics/first-realm/realm.adoc index 34b03aa617..c1749339c0 100755 --- a/topics/first-realm/realm.adoc +++ b/topics/first-realm/realm.adoc @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Login to the {{book.project.name}} Admin Console using the account you created i Admin Console Link:: http://localhost:8080/auth/admin/ -Mouseover the top left corner drop down menu that is titled with `Master`. If you are logged in the master realm +Place the mouse over the top left corner drop down menu that is titled with `Master`. If you are logged in the master realm this drop down menu lists all the realms created. The last entry of this drop down menu is always `Add Realm`. Click this to add a realm. diff --git a/topics/first-realm/user.adoc b/topics/first-realm/user.adoc index 8f2d46834d..6b70a7b1d8 100755 --- a/topics/first-realm/user.adoc +++ b/topics/first-realm/user.adoc @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ image:../../{{book.images}}/credentials.png[] Enter a new password and retype it within the `Password Confirmation` field. Once you do this a red `Reset Password` button should reappear. Clicking on that will reset the user's password to the new one you specified. Please note that -this is a temporary password and the users are required to change it after they first log in. You can make it permanent +this is a temporary password and the user will be required to change it after they first log in. You can make it permanent by flipping the `Temporary` switch from `On` to `Off` before you click the `Reset Password` button. diff --git a/topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc b/topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc index 50b80cb12c..4a955d8f31 100644 --- a/topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc +++ b/topics/secure-jboss-app/subsystem.adoc @@ -7,14 +7,14 @@ Open this file and search for the following text: [source,xml] ---- - + ---- Modify this a little bit to prepare it for pasting in your template from the `Installation` tab. [source,xml] ---- - + ---- @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Within the `subsystem` element, paste in the template. It will look something l [source,xml] ---- - + demo MIIBIjANBgkqhkiG9B @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Change the `WAR MODULE NAME` text to be `vanilla` as follows: [source,xml] ---- - + ...